Life’s Song
Posted by ChayNicholeApr 13
Why would this be considered a problem?
Driving emotions as a natural simplicity;
The instinctual reactions that are so often frowned upon,
Those that drive us ever onward toward love, education, success, and wisdom,
Love in the sense that we cannot discount what we are willing to do,
Education in a manner that only such can give us the knowledge needed to escalate toward success.
Our instincts are that which drive us,
Our emotions are that which spur us on,
Our education is what equips us,
And our successes are that which result from our driving emotions and education, in a combined form.
Lastly; our wisdom, as a product of each, learned only through generations of living.
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2 comments
Comment by Charles on April 13, 2009 at 9:43 AM
I like the progression of this writing. It moves like a story does. It states a possible problem, then offers a sound resolution, backing itself with explainations of basic human instincts and abilities. I’m really liking the line, “Love in the sense that we cannot discount what we are willing to do.” That is a very solid statement. “…instinctual reactions that are so often frowned upon…” Wow, that hits home, does it not? I like this writing, Chay!
Comment by ChayNichole on April 13, 2009 at 5:31 PM
“Love in the sense that we cannot discount what we are willing to do.” This is a realistically wonderful line, particularly in the uncompromising history to prove it’s exactitude, over and over again. I’m very glad you are in like of this phrase.
“…instinctual reactions that are so often frowned upon..” -more than hits home, it almost aggravating how factual this statement is.
Thank you for your response and the encouraging words!